Knock #writephoto

I was a puppet

Used and thrown aside

Living in fake dreams and 

Was empty inside.

I thought of raising my voice 

And making things right

But I always gave up

And didn’t even put a fight

But today I got one usual kick 

But I think it hit me right 

It made me thinking 

How I was living in dark night

Now I am woken up and 

Standing right there 

Cause I am gonna do it 

Knock on the doors of my own head.


Man’s poetry

10 Comments Add yours

  1. Sue Vincent says:

    Reblogged this on Sue Vincent's Daily Echo and commented:
    First in this week…


    1. Oh thanks for doing that and by the way I really liked this weeks photo.


      1. Sue Vincent says:

        My pleasure and thank you 🙂

        Liked by 1 person

  2. Great job with this prompt! I enjoyed the poem 😀


    1. Oh thank you coming from you it really means a lot.

      Liked by 1 person

  3. Very nice! I love the introspection and the slowly blossoming self-awareness.


    1. Thanks for your feedback


  4. Pamela Morse says:

    great ending..funny twist..This is very well written


    1. Oh thanks Pamela


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