Twilight of hope


Laying supine in this Dark hole

Alone, beaten and nobody to hold

Looking for an escape from this darkness of my miseries

But its to dark to follow anything I see.

That darkness was getting in me every moment

Giving up to it was the only option left.

I was seconds away from getting dark inside

When I saw that a dim light

From that twilight.

It made my fight again

Cause little longer is all I have to stay.

Cause now I know that

Sunshine is in his way.


Ashutosh Jha (Man’s poetry)

Linked to Sue’s writephoto prompt also linked to dverse openlinknight


23 Comments Add yours

  1. shalini says:

    Light of hope… Comes to most of us even in the darkest of nights… Except to some.. For some it takes years

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    1. Yeah but it always comes.

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      1. shalini says:

        I dont believe it… Sorry but it’s more of acceptance and resignation than possibility of hope… Some situations are far too difficult for this lifetime

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        1. Shalini hi see I don’t know why you said that but sometimes things does gets messed up. And
          Shalini I don’t know what your problem is but I am suffering from depression too. So I understand how hard sometimes days can get. So if ever need a stranger you wanna talk to just want something to get out of your system here is my email id
          Feel free to mail me I might not be able to solve it but it could be possible that you won’t feel like you are alone. I will be there for you. And I will always reply back. Don’t worry I will do my best if you let me in.

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  2. Jeni G.J says:

    Loved this positive vibe in the morning..let the sunshine shine upon you as well..gud mrng

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    1. Well thanks and good morning to you too.

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  3. The daylight always come… a good thought when all is dark.

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    1. Thanks for such wonderful words.


  4. ZQ says:

    …and so is the light in ones soul. 🙂
    Very nice piece.

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    1. Thank you very much for such a pleasing comment

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  5. frankhubeny says:

    It is a good thing to learn that the darkness is almost over.

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    1. Yes its good thing.

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  6. Thank you for this message of hope. Beautifully written.

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    1. Oh and thanks for this wonderful message too.


  7. The light of hope shall conquer all. That’s nicely penned.

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  8. I wonder why Twilight and not Dawn. Maybe days feel the darkest. There are times in life when that seems true. When jobs or life in general is worse by day and nights seem more free. Being a creature of the night, I can attest to a certain feeling of freedom at night but I like the metaphor of the rising sun, letting in the light. Twilight for me is beautiful, it’s the time when dates begin, when lights in town come on, for celebrations, barbecues, fireworks, romance, fireflies, children’s games of red light, and statues. So I suppose I understand if one is looking for that sweetness and innocence where that kind of hope lies, it would be in the twilight and not in the new working day. It’s a good poem either way!

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    1. Thank you very much for such a mesmerizing comment I have to say that you comment is more beautiful than my poem it self. Glad u liked it.


  9. Sreeblogs says:

    Good take on the prompt👌🏻 beautifully written


  10. sanaarizvi says:

    This is gorgeously written! 🙂


    1. Oh thank you very much.


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