Standing facing mountain of clay

Digging in for my way

Digging through deadend.

Its getting depper everyday

All tired and all i see is gray

but I will still fight my friend.

In dark looking for a ray 

But sure to see it one day

Cause it always end.


Ashutosh Jha

Linked to dVerse Meeting the Bar hosted by Victoria C. Slotto using the form “lai”.


9 Comments Add yours

  1. I hope you see something less gray.


  2. Sumana Roy says:

    I like the spirit in the poem.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. frankhubeny says:

    If you keep going deeper you may go further away from the light.


  4. Sreeblogs says:

    Good one…as always it conveys a deeper meaning, that’s the best thing about your writing


    1. thanks it means a lot

      Liked by 1 person

  5. jerennazuto says:

    Such a wonderful poem. Don’t lose hope.


    1. well i just tried to play with words nothing personal

      Liked by 1 person

      1. jerennazuto says:

        Oh all good then.


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