Lai

Standing facing mountain of clay

Digging in for my way

Digging through deadend.

Its getting depper everyday

All tired and all i see is gray

but I will still fight my friend.

In dark looking for a ray 

But sure to see it one day

Cause it always end.

………………….

Ashutosh Jha

Linked to dVerse Meeting the Bar hosted by Victoria C. Slotto using the form “lai”.

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9 Comments Add yours

  1. I hope you see something less gray.

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  2. Sumana Roy says:

    I like the spirit in the poem.

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  3. frankhubeny says:

    If you keep going deeper you may go further away from the light.

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  4. Sreeblogs says:

    Good one…as always it conveys a deeper meaning, that’s the best thing about your writing

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    1. thanks it means a lot

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  5. jerennazuto says:

    Such a wonderful poem. Don’t lose hope.

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    1. well i just tried to play with words nothing personal

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      1. jerennazuto says:

        Oh all good then.

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