Symbol of past

Looking in mirror 

At the reflection

I found a symbol of my past

A symbol to remind of 

Crossing a stage of mine

One thing that is a Reflection

Of the whole past life of mine

That day I found the first wrinkle of mine.

Man’s poetry.

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Linked to dVerse Poetics hosted by Kim of writinginnorthnorfolk.com with the prompt to write a poem to save someoneโ€™s life. I picked the theme first wrinkle.

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21 Comments Add yours

  1. Lovely pictured both side of true self!! Beautiful poem!!

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    1. Oh thanks for your feedback

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  2. Sreeblogs says:

    Wow this is simply awesome ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿป

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    1. Yeah its simple and a lot you can think about

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  3. Charley says:

    I need to know what elixir you drink if you have only found one wrinkle! It is well crafted, well considered.

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    1. Well I didn’t found any wrinkle I am just 19 now I just wrote this from imagination.

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      1. Charley says:

        Foreshadowing… just wait!

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    2. frankhubeny says:

      I usually find more than one wrinkle as well, unless I’m not looking for wrinkles and then I don’t notice them at all.

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      1. Charley says:

        Um, that’s called denial! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  4. kim881 says:

    Poetry as wrinkles โ€“ yes, wrinkles in time. Writing changes as we get older. Love it!

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    1. Thanks for the reading and your feedback means a lot.

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  5. ฮฉ says:

    Oh, that’s cool. And SO true! I tell my husband all the time that older men are sexy. Men get hotter as they age, I think. Not so for women, in most cases, unfortunately. Well they can, but I think it has more to do with personality and a freer sense of self. Men in their fifties and sixties actually look better to me than men in their twenties and thirties.

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    1. women look beautiful there whole life its constant.

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  6. Oh young man… the first wrinkles just reflects the joy of a night out…

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  7. Ah, just 19… My advice, earn every single one of those wrinkles. They’re proof you lived.

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    1. yeah i will keep that in mind.

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  8. lillian says:

    Late to the reading – apologies. Just back from 5 days with grandchildren ๐Ÿ™‚ They make me forget about all my wrinkles! And, if truth be told, I have no idea which day was the first day I saw a wrinkle or a grey hair. Inconsequential in the scheme of things, right? ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. i am glad that you were able to relate it with yourself. thanks for reading.

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  9. eliza rudolf says:

    Beautifully expressed๐Ÿ˜Š

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