Moments in love part 2

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We did got our jobs
But it kept us away.

But we still were connected

Like sun and earth through a ray.

Sometimes it got hard 

But we always kept trying 

We kissed our way through rocks

And kept love from dying

Together we had only one day 

That kept us apart for next 30 day.

But we showed a maturity and understanding

That made it happen and we kept walking

After all the struggle

We finally found our way

And it was all concluded

When we got married one day.

We were happy and things 

Started to seem right 

But just then our

Family got in our way 

We had to continue our fight.


To be continued…..


Man’s poetry.


15 Comments Add yours

  1. Sreeblogs says:

    It feels like I’m reading a story chapter by chapter ๐Ÿ™‚ a different and unique way to convey a story…simple yet beautiful in its own way

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    1. Well it is based on true story not mine cause I am still in college its about a couple in my family. They didn’t got much support or approval from our family. Its a tribute to there love story.

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      1. Sreeblogs says:

        okay…I would wait to read the rest of this story ๐Ÿ™‚ it’s intriguing

        Liked by 1 person

  2. Precisely expressed!! Every word Filled with beautiful feelings!!


    1. Oh thanks for such wonderful comment I really appreciate it.

      Liked by 1 person

  3. I could imagine a couple live through this poemโ€ฆ feels so authentic and a part of me


    1. Oh I am so happy that you was able to do relate.

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  4. quirkyshine says:

    I really like the way you create something out of your experiences and people you really love… i wish you happiness with her ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š


    1. Its not on my experience its tribute to couple in my family which didn’t got much support from the family and still made there way.


  5. eliza rudolf says:



  6. Love the way you have poured out feelings and poetry in this story! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘


    1. Yeah it was easy cause its true story of someone.

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      1. Wow! That intensifies it’s beauty.


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