Broken house

I lived in broken house 

House which still have my applause

It saved me from all external fire

Keeping me safe was its only desire

It was weak and trembling 

But kept me always warm 

And kept me away from all wrong 

That was happening

It made me what it never was 

It was a broken house that had my applause.

………………………… 

Man’s poetry

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12 Comments Add yours

  1. Sue Vincent says:

    Thank you for joining in this week 🙂

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    1. And thank you for stopping by

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    1. Oh thanks for that

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  2. Yay! You made it to Sue’s writeprompt photos! Well done!

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  3. eliza rudolf says:

    It was a broken house that had my applause…👏👏👏

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    1. I really wait for your comments cause every time they make my work feel special.

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      1. eliza rudolf says:

        Oh that’s indeed a great compliment 4 me…💓💓💓💝😘😘

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