Lost flower

Beautiful scented flower

Gave up to its desire

Felt Eager to grow up and go

Desperate for beauty and more glow

Instead It got an ugly blow.

Blow that threw it away

All it had was been taken that day.

A beautiful flower lost to its desire.

……………………………….

Man’s poetry

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  1. This one was your best till now. So touching and beautiful.

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    1. Oh thank god I am just trying this new thing with symbolism I was just experimenting with this one glad you liked it.

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      1. Symbolism no doubt intensifies the beauty of the written piece. Keep it up!

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  2. Cari says:

    Methaphoric, too, I think๐Ÿ˜Š
    It symbolizes something, alright. I get the vibe of ambition-gone-wrong. Hence,losing the glow in one blowโ€ฆ

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    1. Yeah I did work with symbolism. And thanks for liking it

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  3. Sreeblogs says:

    The poem is as beautiful as the flower ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. thanks it means a lot cause it is coming from you.

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  4. A poignant metaphor for aging. Beautiful.

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    1. Thanks for stopping by mam coming from you means a lot to me.

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  5. eliza rudolf says:

    Desperate for beauty and more glow…๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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    1. Yeah it was a motivation from a movie character of Forrest gump hope you have seen that movie if you didn’t I really want you to.

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      1. eliza rudolf says:

        Okay..that’s good…๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™

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  6. eliza rudolf says:

    And the pics were really…๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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      1. eliza rudolf says:

        ๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜™

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