The one free soul 

Apart from the worlds hustle

Apart from peoples wrestle

Apart from all the social pain 

There is always this one free soul 

 This is the one free soul 

She live her life with with full independence

With no governing power

With no strings controlling 

She is the one with absolute power on herself

She is the one free soul

She might sound happy and satisfied

But nobody is

She is sad she is depressed 

But she doesn’t compromise

Cause she is one free soul

She is kind and she is polite

She helps other and doesn’t hurt 

She puts others before 

But she never demands or askes for help

Cause she is the one free soul

I follow her path and she is my ideal

I respect her thoughts and always obey 

And sometimes I have to be anonymous

Cause she don’t like being helped

Cause she is the free soul.


– To my special someone


10 Comments Add yours

  1. Sreeblogs says:

    The way you describe her and her nature is great…every girl deserves a special someone like you👍


    1. Ya you know the irony about this word “deserve” is people generally don’t get what they deserve. but I think I will wait for what I deserve. But its nice that you liked this one.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Sreeblogs says:

        😊😊 yes you should

        Liked by 1 person

    2. And sorry that I got this senti on your comment.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Sreeblogs says:

        Don’t be…all writers are sort of senti in their own way😊

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  2. Wow such a beautiful description of a free soul. Loved it. 🙂


  3. frankhubeny says:

    I liked the last two lines about her not wanting to be helped because she is a free soul.


    1. well sir i loved each word of your comment i checked your blog before and you have done some really amazing poetry. thanks for stoping by


  4. Wonderful poem and sense of what it is to be a free soul. 🙂


    1. Thanks for these supporting words

      Liked by 1 person

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